Vocab

ackee西非荔枝果
potassium钾
potato salad 土豆沙拉
macaroni and cheese通心粉和奶酪
breadfruit 面包树
curry 咖喱

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今天是12月5日。我吃燕麦片_。我也想分一杯羹的水果。所以我吃了草莓甜甜圈。我吃很多菜。早饭有大量的碳水化合物（糖）。糖让我充分。午餐我吃披萨。比萨有红色的番茄酱，白干酪和棕色痂。比萨有很多油。这是不健康的。我也吃了黄色的苹果。非洲的食物，我吃了晚饭。非洲粮食是非常辛辣，并有多种颜色。香料对健康有益。但石油是不健康的。今天我喝了很多水。
Today is December 5. I eat oatmeal for breakfast. I also want a piece of fruit. I therefore ate a strawberry donuts. I eat enough. my breakfast has a lot of carbohydrates (sugars). Sugar makes me full. lunch, I eat pizza. Pizza have red tomato sauce, white cheese and brown scab. pizza has a lot of oil. This is not healthy. I also eat a yellow apple. Africa's food I ate dinner. African food is very spicy and have many colors. Spices good for health. But oil is not healthy. Today I drank a lot of water.

Gena Gordon

Rhetorical Outline : Mao ZeDong, THE CHINESE PEOPLE HAVE STOOD UP

Purpose: To convince all members of the  Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference (range of political parties and organizations China, all for wide representation) to rally to support new government

Audience: Conference Delegates, awaiting the establishment of the first session of the Chinese People’s Political Consultative Conference. ( Mao Created)

Context: Mao is the first speaker of the FIRST absolute session of the CPPC; September 21, 1949, Beijing , China  

• Conference was set up because a political consultative conference was needed  to set up a democratic coalition government.  

At the conference that day -

• The founding of the People's Republic of China as the will of Chinese

• Central People's Government and CPPCC members were elected. Mao Zedong was made the first chairman of the CPPCC National Committee.
• Warrant: Parties that defeat others are to rise to power

Section 1: Introduction - How CPPCC came to be

Purpose: Remind audience of history , and define what CPPCC is and their work.

Appeals: Establishes ethos because he is the first official to introduce CCPPC                      . Pathos (feel of unity).

Logic=not official enough but very general ( At present the field armies of the People's Liberation Army, several million strong, have pushed the war to areas near Taiwan, Kwangtung, Kwangsi, Kweichow, Szechuan and Sinkiang, and the great majority of the Chinese people have won liberation. In a little more than three years the people of the whole country have closed their ranks, rallied to support the People's Liberation Army, fought the enemy and won basic victory. )

Pathos- mortify audience with past with Kuomintang : does this through word choice ( sabotaged by, oppressed , slaughtered’.

They at the end of reminiscing he adds a shining light on the Communist government that “overthrew them” “restored”  “ we basically defeated”

Technique:  

• Slight logos of successes in the war against the Kuomintang , ( was a easy success)
• Hyperbole - the Kuomintang as "running dogs of imperialism ( used to scare audience but then at the end say the CP has defeated this enemy)

Effectiveness: effective for the members who are supporting the CCPPC but not for enemies such as US which wouldn't be interested in chinas “ new awaking communist party”.

Pathos - to make the organization look good

Technique - Rhetorical Question

If our forefathers, and we also, could weather long years of extreme difficulty and defeat powerful domestic and foreign reactionaries, why can't we now, after victory, build a prosperous and flourishing country?"

Effectiveness

is used to emphasis that there is no reason the chinese can't do that same. this statement hits close to home , filial piety and chinese ancestor worship = must stay loyal no matter what situation

Section 2: Forecast of China because CPPCC is made

Purpose: persuade audience that the CPPC is bringing a bright and  new era to china

Claim:  China has stood up and will become better

“We have very favourable conditions: a population of 475 million people and a territory of 9,600,000 square kilometres. There are indeed difficulties ahead, and a great many too. But we firmly believe that by heroic struggle the people of the country will surmount them all. The Chinese people have rich experience in overcoming difficulties”

- Only pathos - unstable faith to support this, “firmly believe”. What can they provide monetarily , in work in moral support? Too general

Techniques:

Oxymoron-democratic dictatorship ; emphasis that the CP will represent  all but unitarily. it will not be one person’s input or opinions

Anaphora -- "Hail the victory... hail the founding... hail the triumph!"

• build intensity , build pride in delegates that they've won the war , overcome kuo timing and will have a successful conference.
• Tone - charismatic, optimistic

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General Evaluation:

The Bad

• Mao does not use hard core evidence to support in the Communist Parties’ defeat
• Reader has suspicion of some facts but pathos overrides that

i.e  The Chinese have always been a great, courageous, and industrious nation; it is only in the modern times that they have fallen behind.  And that was due entirely to oppression and exploitation by foreign imperialism and domestic reactionary governments."

i.e    "As long as we keep to our style of plain living and hard struggle, as long as we stand united and as long as we persist in the people's democratic dictatorship and unite with our foreign friends, we shall be able to win speedy victory on the economic front."

- gave no logical reason why to struggle to have speedy victory?

The GOOD-

• Uses mostly pathos to make crowd “ feel good” and agree with him ( does this through word choice)
• Makes the Communist party seems as the hero
• Snobby tone “ we basically defeated , we are all convinced that our work will go down in mankind” ( may be due to word translation by Maoist Documentation Project)

- Makes him seem “ all knowing “ , add ethos

今天是12月5日。我吃燕麦片( oatmeal) 早饭。我也想要 了一个水果。因此，我吃了草莓面包圈。我吃够了。该食品具有许多碳水化合物（糖类）。糖类让人很充分。对于午餐我吃比萨饼。比萨有红色番茄酱，白干酪和棕色痂。它有很多的油。这不是健康的。我还吃了一个黄色的苹果。晚饭我吃了非洲粮食。非洲粮食是非常辣和俏皮。香料对健康有好处。但石油是不利于健康的。今天我喝了很多水。

today is december 4. It is very cold and i forgot my tea. i make tea at home . i ate a big breakfast. i ate 2 waffles and beef. i ate my food at school. it was cold food but was good. it was not healthy breakfast. it has alot of oils. for lunch i ate healthy. i ate a sandwhich. my sandwhich had yellow cheese, green lettuce, red tomatoes and white turkey. it had many colors. i ate green melon after math class. i went home . i made cookies with my friend. red velvet cookies are delicious. but red velvet cookies have alot of sugar and fat. we ate many and did not eat dinner

今天是12月4日。天气非常冷，我忘了我的茶。我做在家里喝茶。我吃了很 大早饭。我吃了而个华夫饼（waffle)和牛肉。我吃我的菜在学校。我的菜是 冷，但是不错的。这不是健康的早饭。有很多油。午饭我吃了健康。我吃了sandwich。我sandwich有黄色干酪（cheese)，绿色的生菜，红色的西红柿( tomatoe)和白火鸡。有多种颜色。我的数学课之后吃绿色的瓜。我就回家了。我做了饼干与我的朋友。红色天鹅绒饼干都好吃。但红色天鹅绒饼干有很多糖和脂肪。我们吃了很多，并没有吃晚饭

今天是12月3日。今天我非常健康。我吃了5组食物金字塔。还有，我的菜是非常绿色。我今天早上吃了鸡蛋和一个面包圈。早上我喝绿茶不加糖。我没有吃零食。午饭我吃了沙拉。我的沙拉有西兰花，鸡蛋，黄瓜。我吃了三个菜都在一起。我吃了汤与沙拉。
我没有吃晚饭，因为我早点睡。我觉得健康的菜让我很累了。

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今天是12月2日。早饭我吃了牙买加的西非荔枝果，面包果( yámǎijiā de xīfēi lìzhī guǒ, miànbāo guǒ)和bammy。食物是从昨天剩饭(Shíwù shì cóng zuótiān shèng fàn..)

我吃了很多，因为西非荔枝果是我的最爱。在学校里，我吃一个香蕉。(Wǒ chīle hěnduō, yīnwèi xīfēi lìzhī guǒ shì wǒ de zuì ài. Zài xuéxiào lǐ, wǒ chī yīgè xiāngjiāo.)

香蕉是黄色的。香蕉有大量的钾。午饭我吃了鸡肉三明治。我有橙色的奶酪，生菜，番茄和烧烤酱。(Xiāngjiāo shì huángsè de. Xiāngjiāo yǒu dàliàng de jiǎ. Wǔfàn wǒ chīle jīròu sānmíngzhì. Wǒ yǒu chéngsè de nǎilào, shēngcài, fānqié hé shāokǎo jiàng.

我买了一瓶水。所以我可以更健康。晚饭我有黄色的玉米饼。我也吃土豆沙拉。我没有肉，因为我不想吃肉。我有南瓜饼甜点。南瓜饼是我妈妈最喜欢的食物。我今天吃了更健康，吃更多的水果。(Wǒ mǎile yī píng shuǐ. Suǒyǐ wǒ kěyǐ gèng jiànkāng. Wǎnfàn wǒ yǒu huángsè de yùmǐ bǐng. Wǒ yě chī tǔdòu shālā. Wǒ méiyǒu ròu, yīnwèi wǒ bùxiǎng chī ròu. Wǒ yǒu nánguā bǐng tiándiǎn. Nánguā bǐng shì wǒ māmā zuì xǐhuan de shíwù. Wǒ jīntiān chīle gèng jiànkāng, chī gèng duō de shuǐguǒ.)

地 4

今天我真的很满。我醒来时还是满的最后一晚。我有很多昨晚，我还以为我就要死了。我吃一个橙子的早餐，因为我还没有吃过很多水果。然后吃午饭，我吃西非荔枝果和咸鱼。我吃面包树与西非荔枝果。这是牙买加的国菜。然后吃晚饭，我吃通心粉，土豆沙拉和咖喱鸡。我吃了很多同样的事情，但是这一次我吃得少。还有蔬菜中的土豆沙拉。但我也得到了很多的淀粉，面包和面食。我还没有足够的水果，但我没喝很多水今天保持水分。我的父亲也让我一个水果冰沙。